Fool Me Once
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, Linux, and Android
Revenge is a dish best served cold, and what’s colder than a literal corpse?
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Do not reupload or redistribute Fool Me Once or any of the assets. Streaming the game is allowed for the demo, though only if commentary is added to it.
With your appointment as the royal Summoner, you were to expect glory. Instead, your short career ended with your death. Your achievements and past were buried under the wreckage, somewhere on a plot of barren land called the Crossroads. Death, however, wasn’t your end. It’s only the beginning.
Now, stifled under the thumb of Mastravisch Azvael Ories - the supreme ruler of the Overshadow realm, where ghosts and demons run rampant - you are bound by a life contract - that for an undead means eternal servitude.
Just when you begin to settle into your new life, building some semblance of normalcy, you are betrayed, left to perish. Though weakened, but with a body that finally belongs to you alone, you vow to get revenge on both your almost-destroyer and the damned tyrant that once held your leash.
- a tale of love, trust, betrayal, and revenge,
- dark fantasy, romance,
- customizable protagonist (name, appearance, family relations, pronouns, background),
- five (5) gender-chooseable love interests,
- 5* different endings
- Rating: 17+
- the first 2 chapters (the demo), around 50k words, are free. The full project will be priced at $5
* might be subjected to change
WARNING for dark fantasy setting, dubious morality, blood, gore, graphic violence and depiction of death, on-screen murder, possible cannibalism and minor animal cruelty (demon characters), vomiting, suggestive themes, tyranny. Reader discretion is advised.
LT and locked routes: Picking one RO blocks the others, aside from possible LT: Rez vs Mirren and Lotár vs Malitiōse To romance Saltire, you should remain unattached to anyone in the prologue. Similarly, you need to pick a romantic option with the RO(s) you’re interested in for the game to ‘remember’ your choice. Some romantic choices will be blocked due to your choices i.e.,if you and Mirren have a past, Lotár and Malitiōse will be unavailable during that playthrough, though neither Saltire nor Malitiōse have strictly romantic choices in the prologue.
For the full profiles: check the screenshots, or [this post].
- ☾ The Summoner, MC - [Y/N] [Y/S]
[]chaotic vs []plotting
[]altruistic vs [] self-serving
[]sense of chaos vs []brute force
Species: snake demon
Distinguishing marks: forked tongue, elliptical pupils, piercing on the bridge of nose
Random skill: ballroom dancing
Interests: forbidden knowledge, exploration, chess
Occupation: éminence grise
Alignment: neutral evil
⚔ Mirren ‘Ren’ [indifferent] [steadfast] [patient] [Playlist] [Pinboard]
Species: construct
Distinguishing marks: severe scarring on the left side of face/eye patch
Random skill: cooking
Interests: meditation, transcribing manuscripts, astronomy
Occupation: chancellor (the chief advisor)
Alignment: true neutral
⚔ Rez [brutally honest] [daring] [loyal] [Playlist] [Pinboard]
Species: construct
Distinguishing marks: severe scarring on the right side of face/sewn eye
Random skill: sewing and embroidery
Interests: wrestling, adventures, gambling
Occupation: pursuivant (junior officer of arms)
Alignment: chaotic neutral
♝ Saltire Farros [austere] [earnest] [fair] [Playlist] [Pinboard]
Species: human/ghost
Distinguishing marks: lustrous cobalt eyes (fae-touched)
Random skill: folding complex origami
Interests: weapons, medicine, equestrianism
Occupation: hunter
Alignment: lawful good
✺Malitiōse ‘Mal’ [debonair] [two-faced] [willful] [Playlist] [Pinboard]
Species: shapeshifter (coyote)
Distinguishing marks: fangs, ears and tail
Random skill: can play almost all instruments
Interests: puzzles, deconstructing items, jewelry-making
Occupation: mountebank
Alignment: chaotic evil
Engine: [Ren'Py by Tom Rothamel]
Writing, GUI, coding, art: [PDRRook]
Coding help: [victoriel]
Proofreaders/beta players: [ Steph 'Jeneara' M] [Dom] [Cassiel]
Music by [Dark Fantasy Studio]
Fonts, Free for Personal and Commercial Use: [Caslon Antique] and [Durwent]
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Lotar, my magnificent, totally untrustworthy bastard. I miss you so much :(
I just finished the demo, and I didn't want it to end at all. I had a feeling something was going to happen towards the end, and I was right. I cant wait to read more of it.
romance with Mastravisch when
whimpering pathetically until the full game comes out (i am autistic and OBSESSED)
I need more of this amazing game!
i love mal so much but i despise a certain person and I hope they know who they are cough cough
screams
Mal owns my heart and soul. I'd sacrifice the world for him.
Not if Mal does it first 🤭
Such an interesting and unique concept to approach with IF, tysm for taking the time to create this and I am excited to play more.
Thank you so much for playing! 😊
wanted to leave a comment. but saw this game when searching for more IF games and honestly as first I didn't download it when first spotting it, though saved it in my library. though once fallen into a pleasant addiction for IF games, I stumbled upon here once more. I was getting curious and the comment by mshen19 with their spoiler really drove me over to downloading the demo. and I fell in love with the story, the summoner and the cast. there was a bit of confusion when looking at the relations though that was cleared later when seeing color indicating which path I was going down [it really caught me off guard before being distracted by said pretty colors]
I started with Saltire's route which mostly driven by the spoiler comment. and by golly was he such an innocent bean during his route. and then after him I went for Rez next. and dear lord above that man can just sweep me off my feet any day. I don't even care of the betrayal, from what my memory hopefully recalls right, for the memories had with him just hits me right in the heart. first the flower, and then the other memory with his reaction to the summoner being injured? I was confused when getting carried off before realizing the intentions and my heart broke. even with his tough appearance, he, in my eyes, is a soft squishy bean to the summoner when on his path. first gotta just crawl further in to see it.
I went to Mirren next because made sense. and agree with mshen19 about there being more angst when coming to this man. that and I felt so attuned to the summoner's feelings when doing his path [and the memories] and when being fed by him I was mentally flipping a table for the summoner. while I am not the greatest at picturing things mentally due to aphantasia, but the emotions were strong enough to push through to get an idea.
the only routes I have not gone down yet is the snake and coyote route. I am intrigued and likely will go down them eventually.
can't lie felt bit sad with the interactions being feeling few in the first chapter, though the flashbacks for ROs push the sorrow aside with getting me excited for what you may have planned for each route. also slowed my own playthrough as I had to minimize the screen so I could glance back at the character art before melting at the radiating good looks of the cast.
I am looking forward to when the full game comes out whenever it does. I have a feeling I'll give to temptations and crawl over to your patreon if my wallet looks healthy so that I may support you and feed into seeing updates.
Thanks for giving FMO a try! <3
I really enjoy, both writing and reading, stories that are up to interpretation, so I am aware my projects might not be everyone's cup of tea. The first chapter is intended to be more of MC's backstory, with their 'actual' adventure starting from the moment they find themselves in the Void, finally able to make their own choices.
With that being said, once the game is finished, I'll accept suggestions regarding additional scenes/options. I want FMO to be as enjoyable as possible, so I am very open to the idea of expanding it once main script is fully written.
There's no ETA yet, but I am working towards finishing the remaining chapters within half a year. Patreon's help allows me to spend more time developing my games, but I still have a job outside of it, so I can't throw myself fully into the developing process. Maybe in the future I'll be lucky enough to develop games full time. For now, though, I hope the game will be worth the wait. :D
Well after going through the different routes, I certainly have started to enjoy this tea. For I always enjoy a good romance of any sort and will take a peak at your other works when I am able. As I enjoyed FMO and wish to read more of your writing. Looking back at the game, I can certainly begin to see that as it really did bring about a sense of curiosity for both the summoner and also those around them before the void.
Well right now with the demo itself, I found it very enjoyable. Though I won't lie it'll be certainly interesting to see what suggestions are made to add to your lovely story.
That's quite fine, as most important thing that comes first is you along with your health and wellbeing. Besides I find it very worthwhile to wait, that and I got a job myself now so I can understand things being slow. But whening seeing an update in the itch.io feed it both truly thrilling and exciting whether a game demo updates or reaches released. I cannot wait to see when FMO is fully released, and can only imagine it'll be an addictive play to go down each route!
This is an interesting concept. Admittedly I'm not fond of anything super dark and/or involving other wordly horror or demonic things, but I wasn't to give this a shot because I recently played Perfumare and I loved it. I will definitely update as I have gotten farther into he story, but so far I am just enjoying your talent for storytelling!
(Side note: How did you come up with the names of your characters?)
Dark fantasy is my beloved genre, and most, if not all, of my projects revolve around horror and grotesque, so I don't think they'll be your cup of tea haha. Still, thank you for giving FMO a try. :D
(It depends on the character and their role in the story. Sometimes their name has a specific purpose/meaning, like Malitiose's here. Other times, I just find a name or a word I like, and it resonates with the image of the character that I have in mind. For more 'modern' projects, I like to use names from my list. I like to write down all names and surnames I come across that I like, then I pick and choose what fits best for a specific character.)
Writing is still a 10/10 for me. Thank you for your story.
So I played through 4/5 routes and I have almost seen every option on the altruistic side of things, and even though I didn't think I was going to be able to stomach him, Lotar, ?somehow? has given me the softness. But the ultimate squishy here is MAL. ASDFGHJ. Why on earth am I leaning towards the two morally problematic characters? No clue. My two favorite tropes are enemies to lovers (bonus points if they turn soft and putty like with MC; gold star if they find themselves changing for the better whether it's intentional or not) and friends to lovers. So like kinda the vibes I'm picking up on here as far as these two are concerned? Just the feral protection and sweetness for MC that Mal has is... *chef's kiss* therefore I forgive him for being a big ole brat and down right jerk to others.
And while I'd like to strangle Lotar with his dumb ponytail for being a personal vexation and a buttwipe, the scene before getting Notre? T-T Especially because even though brief, I read that part in horror. I am often around family and picturing child harm is low key a mild trigger for me. I can read a death or misfortune but we start bringing small people into the equation and I gotta dip. Even if it's in just the passing by it's a feels bad, I wanna cry/throw up/panic/shut down all at once moment.
Mirren, is an enigma that I really want to start trying to poke at and figure out. Like, uh, sir?
And I think least of all, no matter what Saltire's route brings, Rez will be at the bottom of my list. Point blank. I vibe with the guys whole personality in the flashbacks and at the keep, but absolutely not. Not just no, but HELL NO.
Thank you for reading! :D
I have to admit that Lotar's and Mal's popularity surprised me, haha! They are both extremely fun to write, though.
That said, I usually prefer a smaller number of ROs in my games, because that's easier for me to handle on my own, but in FMO I thought that, given their extreme, at times personalities, it would be best to give the player a wider variety to pick from, so that hopefully everyone can find a route they enjoy. The workload is much heaver because of it, but I hope it'll ultimately be worth it.
DELIGHTFUL
Thank you! 💛
THIS IS SO GOOD AHHHHH
--spoilers below--
(I'm going to refer to all RO with he/him pronouns to decrease confusion when talking about them in concurrence with the protag)
You do such an amazing job at immersion. When the protag was stuck in Mastravisch's castle, I didn't realize the genuine anxiety I felt until they got freed from his oath by falling into the void and meeting Saltire and Mal. While there are more friendly characters in that castle like Rez and her old mentor, the feeling of Mastravisch's persisting oppression stays.
Speaking about Mastravisch, why am I lowkey simping for that tyrant...
I just KNOW Ren's route is going to have hella angst. The way he was getting pissed off from what Rez tells him when you're on Rez's route?? Also the way he kind of forces caretaking by feeding the protag and then wiping her mouth off to the point where he is distracted enough to not answer Mastravisch's summon immediately. I am ready for that delicious angst.
Rez is soooo football player coded (if that makes sense lol) but in the most violent way possible. The relationship between him and his men is so endearing! And when he embroiders a flower for the protag?? My heart melted. Because two of his traits are "brutally honest" and "loyal," I am super curious about why he betrayed the protag. It can't be for Mastravisch, since the tyrant needs the protag's barrier skills and Rez hates that guy anyway.
When Lotár hides the protag's view from the hanged bodies if you have the altruistic trait, whew! He's a suspicious liar but at least he's open about that. DUDE WHEN THE PROTAG PULLS HIS HAIR?? hhholy shit. UGHHH I LOVEEEE
I really enjoy the dynamic between Saltire and Mal! When I peeked at their alignments I thought they wouldn't get along at all, but now they "fight" like siblings LMAO. And speaking about Mal, I didn't think I'd like him so much?? And the history between him and the protag back when they weren't a ghost is HNNNNN no wonder he's so attuned to them! Replaying after knowing this changes so much
Saltire is so kind, which is why I played his route first. He's such a breath of fresh air compared to the guys at the castle. He has the funniest reactions to "unpure" things! And tell me why his oath to the protag sounds like wedding vows. I was twirling my hair and kicking my legs LMAO
In conclusion to my rambling: I am so in love with this story. And isn't even going into the amazing worldbuilding!
Thank you so much for your comment and for making my day, I am super glad to hear that you enjoyed FMO! (And a big thank you for using the spoiler/space lines! 💛)
Why do I like Mal so much, they're so evil? What have you done to me? /j
Well they are evil but very honest about it? And honesty is a very attractive trait, is it not? 😉
I adore this game <3 But I noticed some of the choices are blocked- how do I choose the "romantic" option in the bathtub scene with Malitiose? All of the flirty responses are blocked for Lotar as well. Pls help!!
Thank you! :D To unlock Malitiose’s route, you can’t pick any romantic choices with the other ROs during the first chapter, save for Lotár’s. Similarly, if you want to pursue Lotár, you need to steer clear from Mirren’s and Rez’s heart marked options. Additionally, your alignment changes some of the romantic and non-romantic scenes, though it doesn’t lock you out of any route. Hope it helps!
Love the game, the writing's amazing! One thing I've noticed is that choosing the "romantic" choice during the bath scene with Malitiose sets his route, but also deletes a huge chunk of his accumulated relationship stat. Is that intentional? Thank you so much.
Thank you! <3 It's a bug, sorry! The stats in chapter 2 are messed up in places, but it doesn't block you from any scenes/choices in the demo, so you're not missing anything content-wise. I'll get the fix done as soon as I can, though!
The stat changes in chapter 2 confuses me. Sometimes, a choice that should raise my high stats lowers them instead, or does nothing at all.
Strange indeed! I'll take a look at the code, thanks for letting me know. :D
Edit: I took a gander at the code and asked for a second option from my editor, who fixed-up my stats, and I have to make it clear that there are (usually flavor choices) that don't raise or lower your stats, and there are choices that will only lower your stats (mostly for romance, but these are rather obvious). If you could detail which stat choice(s) confused you specifically, I'll have a better chance of making sure that the stats are indeed functioning correctly and the result of each choice is clear to the player.
I have also seen same weird behavior specifically from altruistic stat when player has a choice to accept Saltire without an oath or make him swear it. Choice to believe him somehow tanked altruistic stat, if I remember correctly. And later, on choosing Saltire route (to accompany him), it somehow greatly lowered his affection stat.
Yes! Thank you for specifying, that is indeed a bug. I already found the faulty code, and I am in the middle of fixing the issue. Thanks again!
so before the 2.1 update, i was hellbent on Lotár without giving anyone else attention.. that's what i strive for until.. Malitiōse snatched my attention ;-; now i love both Lotár and Malitiōse and strive for BOTH of them now.
it's really funny, when i read about Malitiōse. i thought i was gonna hellbent hate him. but oh boy, i've been proven wrong. oh dear, oh god. how can the author do this to me?! so many thoughts have been thought about. and this vn will have a chokehold on me.
would buy it 100% when i have the money just for the fact that i am curious about both the world and characters and wanted to support the author. thanks so much for creating this, i greatly enjoyed it <3
Can't wait to play the full game!!!!! Love it ;D
Also... ... steam version, plzzzz?
Thank you! :D I am also very excited to share the full game as soon as it's done!
Ah, no, sorry. I am not planning on releasing my games on Steam right now, as they require a registration fee of US$100 for each published game + 30% revenue of said game(s). Aside from that, creating a Steam page and the approval process both take a lot of time and work, unlike here. Itch.io lets me do all that and more for basically no cost on my part, so, as a small solo dev Steam is just not a service I can comfortably afford. :)
Lotar is my favorite character he is hilarious also this game is super fun!!
can't wait to buy the full thing when it comes out <3 all the ROS are amazing
I would die for Lotar omg thank you so much for this chapter. I'm so excited for the final game. The writing is amazing, your word choice is beautiful, and the tension between MC and Lotar is just *chefs kiss*. Please please please keep up the good work! I'm going to go play through the rest of the routes now :)
Oh my, Chapter 2 was insanely good!!!!!!! So well-written (no surprises there, it's always like this with your work), the story is so amazing AND THE FUCKING CHARACTERS...... I LOVE THEM. ALL OF THEM.
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I was not expecting at all the dynamic that Saltire/Malitiose have. I thought they would totally despise each other but no. Okay, they are far from best friends, but the teasing was so, so good hahahahahahaha The dynamic between Saltire/MC/Malitiose is the best; I love it deeply. And talking about surprises, I don't know why I had it in me that I wouldn't like Malitiose much, and oh boy, HOW WRONG I WAS. I'm down bad for this guy, I swear, and I'm definitely curious about his past with MC. Like very curious.
I like how Chapter 1 and 2 are so different. What I mean is, in Chapter 1, you are surrounded by people that you don't trust at all (I'm looking at you two, Mirren and Lotár), and one of the few that you actually trust DOES THAT. But Chapter 2, okay, you still are with people that you don't trust, but both of them show that they would do anything for you. It's refreshing, really. MC needs a break hahahahhahahahahaha.
My favorite part of Chapter 2 is when MC reminisces about her time with Lotár... that was something else, a very good job!!! Finally (because I know I'm just rambling at this point), it's hard to pick a favorite when all your characters are so well made. Choosing between Mirren, Lotár, and Malitiose is almost impossible for me, but I will say it's Lotár for now. I love that damn snake so much ahahahahaha.
Hope you stay safe and healthy, and I'M SO HYPED AAAAAA! Thank you for this amazing, awesome, perfect work you have here <3
BRO THIS UPDATE WAS SO SCRUMPTIOUS great job author!! The writing was sharp as always, and I can't (but will) wait to see more! I'm obviously biased since I'm down *bad* for Maltiose but I fucking devoured this new chapter IT WAS SOO GOOD
WHY IS THIS SO GOOD OMG I LOVE IT!! also, rez for life les gooo-
Thank you! :D
Mastravisch 🫣
Love the story and the characters ! I have so many questions about them ! I'm gonna replay right now to discover other paths !
Glad to hear it, and I hope the new updates will also be to your liking!
This is so awesome!! I love the UI and atmosphere of the game! I also really appreciate how there's a lawful good LI <3
Thanks for playing! <3
thank you so much for blessing us with your works this game is amazing and i cant wait for more updates ❤️✨
Thank *you* for playing and leaving me such a nice comment!
I love it :O I can't wait for more <3
Thank you! I hope the updates will also be satisfactory. :)
I adore every single LI but I'm also simping for the tyrant, lord help me I am trash XD If he becomes a magical secret route I am gonna climb him like an evil tree.
Also SPOILERS
AND I THOUGHT LOTAR WAS THE SNAKE WTF REZ I TRUSTED YOUUUUUUUUI am glad to hear it! <3 I am not planning on adding M as a RO for various reasons, but I think the main one will be obvious later on. It is plot-related, that’s all I can say for now. ;)
Please, do keep the spoilers off the main page if that’s all right with you, I’d really appreciate that. Especially with the comments that are more up high, it can ruin other players’ first experience. You can do so by either by adding a few blank passages that will put your spoiler under ‘read more’ or simply using the devlog(s) you can find them just below the download button. Thank you! :D
Thank you for the advice <3 I hid the spoilers, I didn't know how to do it well but now I put them under read more.
Nice game! I love all the LI's but also want the tyrant ruler lmao
Thank you! :D
im kinda down bad for Mastravisch... like holy shit, im supposed to hate him.
Anyway, this game is really good, i just hope it's not abandoned and even more so when i'm itching for it. Also, the art is another thing that makes my iq room temperature rise. GOD DAMN IT I LOVE THIS GAME AAA
Haha, yes you are more than supposed to, it’s highly encouraged. 😂 I definitely did not see that one coming, but well, I am glad to see all of you enjoying yourself.
Thank you! It’s not abandoned, don’t worry! As a passion project, I can promise that unless something happens to me, I will continue working on it no matter what. The second chapter is actually almost done, half of it is officially out, though I only offer the partial updates on my Patreon. This release takes slightly longer because aside from working on another IF, and well, working in general, my friend is helping me re-code the game in Twine to add more features such as letting the player set the gender of the ROs separately etc. I really can’t wait for you all to see the new stuff, I am SO stoked!
No but when I say that I would love to live in PDRRook's brain I'M SERIOUS. I love their stuff I can't get enough I swear..
I started playing their vns because the art caught my attention but I stayed for the stories <3
Thank you for making my entire week 🥺❤️
I have just come across this game and have not have time to play yet (but I definitely will, promise!). I just write this cmt to ask if, um, we will able to have time to sit down and fold complex origami with Saltire :)) ? Because when can this interesting skill of his be mentioned in the plot lol, that would have been nice XD
There will be a scene where Saltire’s hobby is more or less obvious, but folding origami together hm, I’ll keep that in mind!
Hehe that would be nice, I will keep looking forward to it!
This was really terrific! Mirren caught my interest right off I just got these angsty vibes whilst reading lol I'd like to think that the reason he avoids eye contact/touch is because otherwise he would reveal his all consuming love/lust lol oh how I can wish! His teeth grinding just cinches it for me. Rez now... Damn. His route will be second for me definitely but Mirren is first :D I will definitely pay $5 for the full game no problem!
Thank you! <3 I am glad to hear it! Mirren’s romance is one of my favorites to write (all that angst and unvoiced tension, my beloved), so I hope you’ll enjoy the rest of the route!
Am I the only weirdo sitting here like 'okay but can we get freaky with Mastravisch?' Lol, this demo is so interesting though!! I REALLY looking forward to the second chapter. Is there an ETA? :)
NO YOU ARE NOT THE ONLY ONE I'M LOSING MY MIND HERE LMAO
No ETA, sorry, as I am busy with IRL work, but I am writing as fast as I can, and making progress slowly but surely. I am hoping to have the second chapter finished this month though, fingers crossed.
not me lowkey kinda curious about mastravisch and a toxic ass romance </3 need therapy. Anyway great demo! looking forward to the rest
I can promise more M, but not much romance, least of all reciprocated, sorry! For plot-reasons, mostly, aside from all that uh obvious power imbalance and such. I’ll keep that in mind for some misc snippets/scenes, though! Maybe from some what-if scenario, I need them to have more of an equal footing for it to be more digestive for me, but I will tag everything appropriately. It’ll still be dark, all things considered, but hopefully interesting enough to satisfy the tyrant-lovin’ connoisseurs 🤔😂
Could we not have the option to vary the ro's gender? Don't get me wrong, I absolutely love the game so far, but as a bi person that kind of puts me off...
I answered the question just down below (one comment down), so allow me to just copy-paste the answer: "I get what you mean, but honestly it’s only for the ease of coding for me, since it’s way simpler to have and use one variable for all ROs, than different for each, at last for a rookie like me, I mean. I will keep that in mind for when the game is done, though, but I can’t promise anything."
Oh, glob. I love this. Just the early parts of first chapter was enough to pull me into the story and immersed me in the world inside it. My glob. I'm reeling from the betrayal, and I feel all the emotions so much.
I really love the way you write your stories, poignant and immersive. I'm looking forward to more of this.
Thank you sm! :D